The Plot Versus Character Conundrum

So I’ve been thinking about something. When my friends and I talk about books or movies or TV shows, why do we almost never mention plot? For the most part, we only talk about characters—who was brave, who was sweet, who was strong, who was deliciously wicked or witty or angst-ridden. We don’t talk much about plot. If we do, it’s only in relation to what a specific moment revealed about the characters. “Oh man, that character was so cool when they did [x]!”

A lot of my favorite stories are criticized for not having much in the way of plot, or for a plot that drags too much. Take Game of Thrones, for example. I’ve heard multiple people say that A Song of Ice and Fire barely has a plot, that all George R. R. Martin does is write about interesting people who bump into each other and interact in unusual (and often bizarre or dramatic) ways. But the fans love it! We don’t care about tight plotting; we just want to find out what Arya or Tyrion or Daenerys or Jon Snow will do next. Because they’re fascinating characters, and we like them, and we love to watch interesting personalities collide.

As a story fan, I guess don’t care much about plot, per se. For me, character trumps everything else. And it seems like that holds true for most of my fellow story geeks. A story with a tense plot or exciting premise might catch my attention, but I’ll never fall in love with it unless it has an emphasis on character—specifically, on character interaction and character development. Maybe this is why some “page turners” don’t stick with me, or fail to catch my attention at all.

Honestly, this is a conundrum for writers. We are often told to write as tightly as possible, to cut any character interaction that isn’t essential to the main plot. It’s not bad advice, far from it. The last thing you want as a writer is to bore your readers, and risk losing their interest. But according to that rule, most of my favorite moments from books should have been shortened, or cut entirely.

In the end, this isn’t an “either/or” situation. A story can have an exciting plot and plenty of character interaction. One of the best solutions at a writer’s disposal is to combine the two. When a story focuses on interesting characters who make choices, and those choices reveal something about them, their character development becomes the plot. Often, boring stories are boring because they fail to connect plot and character, not because they need more of either element.

Still, this subject does give me pause when I write. I often wonder if I’ve included enough interaction between my characters, if I’ve revealed enough about them as individuals to catch the interest and affection of a reader like me. Ultimately, I try to write what I love to read—and to do it as efficiently and effectively as possible, without removing every fun moment from the story altogether.

And when in doubt, writers can always go for the Joss Whedon method. Just make your characters witty enough that no matter how action-packed the plot gets, the story has plenty of humorous dialogue that reveals what the characters really think about each other…

Teatime Tuesday #8

Welcome back to teatime! For this post, I wanted to talk about one of my new favorite companies, Verdant Tea. They work closely with local farmers in China, and air ship their teas so they stay as fresh as possible. Plus they have a cool blog with stories about their teas, and advice on how to prepare and taste them.

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For today’s tea, I’m sampling their Traditional Tieguanyin. I’ve tried their greener Spring Tieguanyin (which is delicious, by the way). This one is partially oxidized, which gives it a light toasted flavor. Verdant’s site describes it as having notes of violet and caramel, and I agree. It’s a smooth, delicate tea and keeps its creamy flavor over multiple steepings.

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I highly recommend browsing Verdant’s website. They have a lot of delicious teas and tea blends. Some of my favorites are Autumn Harvest Laoshan Green, Laoshan Village Chai, and Golden Fleece. You can read lots of reviews about their teas here on Steepster.

Thanks for joining me for tea!

A Few Random Updates

So on the subject of nostalgia, here’s another trailer that has me excited, due to a combination of fun childhood memories and wasn’t-that-awesome geekiness…

Also, since I recently mentioned that scones are serious business, I thought I’d take this chance to share a few photos from my summer trip to England. We had formal afternoon tea on two occasions, once in the Cotswolds and once outside Windsor Castle. Lots of sandwiches and scones and cake (and tea!). The first time, we had beautiful sunny weather outside. We had some light rain the second time, which I personally enjoyed. (I’m from Arizona, so rain is a novelty for me. Plus it seems appropriate on a trip to England.)

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I need to talk more about my trip sometime! I’ll try to do that over the next few months. Since I’ll be working on a new story set in my magical version of Victorian England, it’ll be a good way to stay in that headspace.

Teatime Tuesday #7

Hello again! I hope all you Americans out there had an awesome Thanksgiving, and everyone else had an awesome Thursday. Today’s post features my favorite snack to pair with tea: scones.

Scones are serious business. If you want to do them right, you need jam or preserves, plus clotted cream. So for today, I picked up some clotted cream and berry preserves from the World Market, and a cranberry scone from Wildflower Bread Company.

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These preserves are fantastic, by the way. They’re made with strawberry, raspberry, and blackcurrant. (The first two are my favorite berries, and the third is also delicious, apparently.)

Scones! Also tea.

Anyway, to eat scones, just smear as much jam and cream onto the scone as you can stand. Smear it together all in a creamy sticky mess. Then enjoy!

Scones again! Also tea again.

And of course no teatime is complete without tea. Today’s selection is Golden Snail from Whispering Pines Tea Company. It’s a smooth black tea with notes of bread and honey, which really complement the scone.

Thanks for joining me for tea!

Nostalgia, Tolkien, and Sailor Scouts

Lately I feel like I’m living my teen years all over again. (Which is convenient, since I write YA fiction!) Not because I’m feeling especially adventurous or hormonal—although to be honest, I didn’t feel like that much as a teenager either—but because some of the stories I loved when I was a teen are being reborn.

For me, junior high was all about Sailor Moon. I fell in love with the show when I was thirteen. I’d never seen a show—or story of any kind—with such a large female cast. It had all sorts of girls: clumsy, smart, poised, sweet, bold, reserved. It inspired and captivated me. To this day, my love for Sailor Moon reminds me to make the characters in my stories diverse, with all kinds of different personalities.

And now Sailor Moon’s back! A brand-new anime is being released, called Sailor Moon Crystal. The story is based on the manga (a.k.a. comic book) version, and the art is gorgeous. I’m really enjoying it so far… And the feeling of nostalgia is priceless. You can watch it on Hulu for free here.

My high school years were all about The Lord of the Rings. I saw Peter Jackson’s version of The Fellowship of the Ring in December of my sophomore year, and it changed my life (and my taste in literature). I devoured the books that spring, and eagerly awaited the next two movies, loving each one more than the last. To this day, The Return of the King is probably my favorite film. It gives me chills, it makes me happy-cry—and it reminds me why I love to read and write in the fantasy genre.

Which is why I am beyond excited to see The Hobbit: The Battle of the Five Armies next month! Getting to watch new movies based on Tolkien’s work has been so much fun. And delicious nostalgia aside, the new films are great. I like how they’re an “extended version” of The Hobbit novel, with so many tie-ins to The Lord of the Rings. (Though that might be my undying love for the Fellowship talking.)

All told, I’ve enjoyed the chance to witness the rebirth of some of my favorite fictional worlds over the past few years. It’s a fun coincidence—and reminds me of how I came to love stories so much, as well as the decision I made to create stories of my own.

Funnily enough, I spent most of junior high drawing an original comic that was pretty much a Sailor Moon knockoff. The first fantasy novel I ever wrote was a Tolkien-esque tale set in a world with four different races. Granted, they weren’t dwarves, humans, elves, and orcs… But the inspiration was obvious. I owe my start as a storyteller in part to these two fictional universes. It makes me wonder how these latest incarnations might inspire a new generation of storytellers.

(And then I remember that Star Wars VII has yet to come out, and how I spent my years in elementary school running around with a plastic lightsaber and a cape, and I realize that this cycle will keep going for many years to come.)